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[icon] Title:  In The End. Author: Lilly for Algernon Rating: PG… - Veronica Mars 100
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Title:  In The End.
Author: Lilly for Algernon
Rating: PG
Word Count: 122
Summary: In the end, it doesn't even matter...
Characters: Veronica
Spoilers/Warnings: N/A


In the end it goes down exactly as they always said it would (Her Father, Wallace, Logan, Mac).  In the end it’s Liam Fitzpatrick holding a gun to my head, and I’m wondering why I’m never got around to leaving Neptune.  In the end it’s just him, and me and I favor one last glance at the door just in case. In the end it’s not about money or even power, it’s about lead ripping through fragile flesh and brain matter. In the end, he’s too late, Logan doesn’t come just in the nick of time, and he doesn’t pull a superman or a robin and save the day. In the end, like a song, it wouldn’t have mattered if he had.
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leesh_17
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Time:2007-04-04 05:08 pm (UTC)
I really like this fic.
It's so simply put, exactly how Veronica would have thought about it.
A clean, precise, almost clinical detachment to the scene itself, even though it's written in her point of view.
I really loved this line, it just really got under my skin for some reason
"In the end, like a song, it wouldn’t have mattered if he had."
Really great job, an excellent piece of writing.
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lixta
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Time:2007-04-11 07:47 pm (UTC)
Excellent. Stark and matter-of-fact.
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